After reading the 21 chapters available, this is what I think.
It takes time and effort to create webcomics. That effort should be spent on stories that are interesting and worth illustrating. This story is not worth that effort.
The characters, all of them, are not interesting whatsoever. Their actions barely make sense. The world-building is garbage. The system character is very annoying and actively works towards making the story less interesting and fun.
Such mediocre and poorly thought out story writing is only good for scrambling one's mind and making them less intelligent. The premise is decent and able to be worked with, but the author's delivery and current interpretation of the story is irredeemable.
I wish the writing had been taken more seriously, or I wish that if this was supposed to be a comedy it could be funny. The story needs a stronger foundation to be laid. The world-building and exposition should explain some fundamental things to make me strongly understand the basic setting of the story and care. The adversity that the main character faces should be more clear and intense than the flippant and irritating system character that forces her to make stupid, inconsequential decisions or die. The characters need more personality, motivations, and rationality. Everything feels so thoughtless, thin, and lukewarm.