Okay, I will have to divide this in parts.
The ratings are shockingly high here, if they're for the main story. When I first started to read it, I thought "that's just what I'm looking for." I didn't want emotional depth this time (though I'm usually a sucker for it), but then it kinda disappointed me. It was predictable =/
I liked some parts, especially some dialogues or character's thought lines. For instance, how Murakami thinks he's special without any reason for that. It's very believable and people can relate to it. I've never seen a manga portray that feeling so good as this one and that's definitely a positive point.
But the characters aren't great...the seme kinda pissed me off. I mean, he's so...normal. So simple and plain! He's not overly gentle - which is something I hate - and yet not pushy. He's like, nothing! The uke steals all the attention - and just because he's pretty, too, because he's just as plain. I can't see where he's cold, as the description says. He's just a bit of a player and likes too fool around.
It lacked things, too. Murakami seemed not to be gay - when he's shocked because he fell for Ashihara - but he's totally fine with it in a second. Also, I don't really like how a conflict of two years could be solved so easily and out of the blue. I wished for a more complex resolution...though Ashihara's did surprise me a bit on that, so I liked it. But ahhh, authors waste so many chances! It would've been so much more interesting if Murakami said he didn't have any obligation of going to Ashihara's shop, when Ashihara asked him about it! But nooo, he just HAS to be honest and make it boring.
Well, the first chapter isn't really good, but it starts to get a little better as follows. And as it gets better, Ashihara gets more interesting and Murakami gets more annoying. Argh, he even gets whiny after a while, he pisses me off.
And actually, it would be much more interesting if Murakami ended up with Sakaki after all, it'd be pretty creative and unexpected. But I like how they strangely turned out to be friends, it was cute.
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Anyways, then I got to the extra story and...I LOVE IT. That should be rated high! It is so original and innovative!
The artwork in this chapter is so pretty, too! Their expressions tell exactly all of their emotions. As Shibuya said a few times, Mikami's looks can REALLY tell how he feels, and that's what's beautiful about it!
Mikami on his own is just so.freaking.adorable!! He's tsundere-ish, and always keeps everything to himself. He's cute, but strangely in a manly way for an uke who rarely speaks and is so timid. I guess that rebellious side of him is what makes him sexy.
And Shibuya is just hot. I mean, he is SUCH a player! And he's immature, which makes him very likable for some reason. I just wanted to take both home with me!
They're relationship is so complex, it almost made me cry only by looking at them! They're silent, they never say a thing, even though they're really hurt inside. It's not like they are in pain...is more like their relationship has to evolve from where it is. They love each other, even though none of them express it, which is why Shibuya plays with Mikami's feelings. Just to see if they're mutual...and it's so angsty!
I love everything about this story! The only thing is that I wish it was longer =/ The end left me with a bittersweet taste, as if it wasn't complete. I wish this was the main story!
Now I just have to read Tarinai Jikan! - even though it's a sort of prequel to this chapter.
Well, I will rate it according to both the stories, but if I had to rate separately, I'd give the side-story 10, and a medium rank to the main one.
PS: I have to say I smirked over @mica363's remark about Totally Captivated...it's my favorite manga!